MAY ALL YOUR WISHES COME TRUE

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MAY ALL YOUR WISHES COME TRUE

Postby abuali » 16 Oct 2004, 00:20

With the coming of every new day,
Just as at dusk the sun sets away,
My heart always whispers a prayer for you,
May all your wishes come true.


Sometimes in life everything seems wrong,
The day passes slowly and the nights are long,
Always remember I am praying for you,
May all your wishes come true.


When there is no one to share your feelings with,
And you think you cannot trust anyone even a bit,
Try sharing them with God, even if a few,
May all your wishes come true.


God loves you more than anyone ever can,
For his blessings surround you and every other man,
To follow his laws, in return, is the least we can do,
May all your wishes come true.


Sometimes we get doubts on our belief,
Cause our prayers are not granted and we are not in relief,
Stop and think, the prayer not being granted might have been better for you,
May all your wishes, WHICH ARE BETTER FOR YOU, come true.


Life is a very weird song,
Time is short but the journey endlessly long,
Heaven or hell? A choice has to be made between the two,
May all your wishes, WHICH ARE BETTER FOR YOU, come true.


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Postby Guest » 16 Oct 2004, 13:53

This is a beautiful and very touching poem indeed..
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Postby Guest » 16 Oct 2004, 13:55

This is a beautiful and very touching poem indeed..
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Postby Guest » 16 Oct 2004, 13:58

This is a beautiful and very touching poem indeed..
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Thank you for your kind comments

Postby abuali » 17 Oct 2004, 00:40

I really appreciate the comments. Please feel free to join the forum and post your own poems.
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Postby choco.chip » 17 Oct 2004, 02:28

Beautiful, Hasin.
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