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Postby Muntazir » 24 Oct 2004, 20:22

I talk to God, day and night.
I ask him to set me free, up, from the sky.
I tell him i love my mummy and she is all mine.
I want to see her, please let me go at nine.

Now that i am already in this little room here, i cant wait to show my self with all my tears.
To tell her that i love her soo much and that she shouldn't fear, i just cant wait to come out and never to leave her.

I dont know what's taking long, i hope things are clear.
I hear my mummy cry soo much, why? Is the pain soo much deeper?
I am starting to feel this pain, i dont know what's going on here.
Oh, now i'am soo weaker, i cant even move or cant even feel her.

Now i'am awake from being asleep, but why am i on Allah's lap?
M asking him to tell me what happened, and he said i'am no longer with my mummy there.
But why and what happened that i'am back with you, he said your mummy took an abortion and sent you back.

I wonder what abortion is, i'am crying to go back.
I guess my mummy loves me soo much that she sent me to God again.
I miss my mummy soo much, i wish i could be with her there.

Oh Allah send a message down there, tel my mummy i love her to the end.

This isn't from the internet or from a book, i just sat and gave a thought, please read and do understand, dont go for abortion. I dont know if i have written it right, but i guess everyone can feel and understand my words.
Allah Hafidh.
as-Salaamu 'aleykum warahmatullah
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Postby abuali » 25 Oct 2004, 00:47

That was a very nice poem....

I am creating a seperate forum of 'Abortion' under the category of vices.

Do also post this poem there...


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