BLUNDER

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BLUNDER

Postby shaziya » 27 Nov 2004, 19:57

Sitting here i wonder, how my joyous life turned into blunder; :?
Just yesterday was it when i was laughing, until she heard me coughing;
Here stuck in my room i look for a way; :roll:
To hear what my friendz have to say; :o
Desperate am i more than a baby crying for it's mother; :cry:
To run away and escape for the MEAN old doctor; :twisted:
Just the thought gives me creeps; :shock:
On how he uses the needles to get me to sleep; :x
Oh!! yes i wonder how on earth i got myself into this blunder. :(
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Postby abuali » 27 Nov 2004, 20:58

Thats a very nice poem Shaziya...

Very well written...and mysterious...

I wonder what this 'Blunder' is?

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